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this shit was hot and i was like wtf??? when i saw the post before mine critcizing bizzurk...
i actually thought his hit harder myself...
Excuse me miss you stole my heart and dropped your wallet
So beautiful in an ugly world, as I follow you home from college
I see the pain beneath your smile and the things on your shelf
You can use my help, hello there; I know you better than yourself
can you not see how well worded this is...i mean this is just a taste the rest was crazy
bizzurk had nice wording,nice imagery,nice flow, and story theme...
hazy- hit that twist and made it seem more reality and hit it with a diffeent aspect...i thought yours was worded well with nice wording,nice imagery,nice flow, and story theme...
hot ass collab keep dropping...
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