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Old 10-02-03, 10:19 PM   #10
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this shit was hot and i was like wtf??? when i saw the post before mine critcizing bizzurk...

i actually thought his hit harder myself...

Excuse me miss you stole my heart and dropped your wallet
So beautiful in an ugly world, as I follow you home from college
I see the pain beneath your smile and the things on your shelf
You can use my help, hello there; I know you better than yourself
can you not see how well worded this is...i mean this is just a taste the rest was crazy

bizzurk had nice wording,nice imagery,nice flow, and story theme...

hazy- hit that twist and made it seem more reality and hit it with a diffeent aspect...i thought yours was worded well with nice wording,nice imagery,nice flow, and story theme...

hot ass collab keep dropping...

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