nice drop, ur flow was good, ur vocab was alrihgt, u had good content and u stuck to ur topic pretty well, what u could use though is some more wordplay but ur rhyme scheme was alright, I think this is a pretty straight forward piece and it's an easy read so good job keep droppin and elevatin.

if u got the time check out my song "ways of life" should be like right at the top. it's kinda a long piece but if u could kindly read through it all and leave me some feedback then that'd be great. thanx in advance peace.

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