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Old 10-02-03, 11:09 PM   #2
Gene Pool
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again another easy piece to read but this one sounded a bit more like a poem more then a rhyme but I guess it don't really matter but other then that it was an ok drop, stayed on topic and ur content was good, vocab was a bit lacking in this peice and the flow kinda broke off in some parts, but all in all it was an ok drop and for the note ur only allowed one open mic a day so keep that in mind, if u wanna know y read the open mic rules. keep droppin peace.
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