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10-03-03, 05:07 AM

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Ok well Masta you did a good job of keepin the rhymes tight without too much problem... my only suggestion is that your tense could be watched closer jus to not get sloppy.

realist was ok but i have a note..."Living Only for Vivid Endings"
L.O.V.E. right? dude that's an acronym not an abbreviation... ya feel?

{Peace}

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