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Old 10-03-03, 08:29 AM   #22
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This was a decent drop, i liked ur vocab , and ur message in it was real nice, a good concept , .. u had olso a nice flow, ..., but i have to agree with the other cat, u can better split ur lines, ..cuz they look kinda long, ...but still overall a decent piece

Will u be so kind to hit up my poetry piece?,
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