I was feelin this piece, .....the vocab like potent stated was real hot, ...and high, ..nice concept and a real nice imagery, ...flow was there ^^plus some line made me kinda think
plus the anger u put in some lines was real nice to read to.
Are there solutions? Can we salvage years of embracing the dead?
Can we claim what's rightfully ours and take back the space in our head?
I don't know the answers . . Unfortunately, I can't seem to slow advancers
Minds to waste behind in haste - Our bodies teem with boneless cancer
And olso i liked these lines real nice drop
Would u be so kind so hit up my open mic wit ayura and a poetry piece of me ^^Preciated
Pz