yea your flow was like no where
u need to realise being a newbie
isnt such a bad thing all u need is
guidance and u will peak dopness
umm yea make sure next time you
spit on a topic, not just randomness
or yourself, like a topic,, umm u need
to work on flow by maintaining a rhyme
scheme and a strong bar structure
like and even your lines more it helps
with flow if your gunna go lien for line
just keep playing with your style until
u reach certain elivation and u'll get the
hang of "text"..........................................

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