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Old 10-03-03, 06:55 PM   #4
pot1ent
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This was a good piece

Your flow seemed very basic...I think this needs some work on...Unless i missed it...But i read it like twice...But

You had some real tight wordplay

Image is everything... Ever seen a "thugged" manager...
Equality? How so when a woman has a job handed to her...

Thats it right there...that is the shit

I thought you kept meanig behind lines with going on topic thta lil bit...< but hardly anything...

Pz...Props
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