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Old 10-03-03, 07:45 PM   #4
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Good Lines from Both Mistik and TDC

Mistik, You had some dope lines in there, A nice flow, structure needs a tinsy winsy bit of work, but you'll get there

I Know What Is What, Right From Wrong, I Have No Need To Contemplate..
I Choose My Fate, In Gods Name I Will Fight For My Beliefs..
^nice


Thugz......One of the best, if not the best verse I've read from you. Your flow was definately shining, and your writing has progressed I see.

Reflections so called troubles, givin in to the rejections of obstacles u face in life,
feels like failure, so u turn to god,ur family, ur friends or to ur wife.


dopeness. Good Shit Guys!
and that...is cool
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