Yep...It was pretty good.
Not really as bad as I thought it would be, and yeah the topic is hard as hell. Try Flash Floods for a topic. But anywho, Your flow was simple, yet made it easy to read, and easier to acknowledge the piece's shining points. Lots of Nice Lines in here, and some points of brilliance(not really, just trying to make you feel better)
Image is everything... Ever seen a "thugged" manager...
Equality? How so when a woman has a job handed to her...
A whole generation held back... Elders fear evolution...
Fear of new thoughts... Fear of the power they'll be losin...
^best lines because they are so true. Nice Piece, and good luck on your casket match next week
