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ye tha flow did start strong and surged near the end.... this is true... the only thing that i saw that was really hampering the lines was the lists.... they only kinda worked... (didnt like etc in the middle of the one line)

make sure you don't throw in similes for the sake of rhyming....

i didn't feel "path expands in to many splits, like a newspaper exclusive"... maybe you can xplain to me what this really means...

overall it was a 6.6/10 and oh yea don't listen to any chumps who tell you to use more "internals" or "multies" so you can "elevate" that shit is full on WHACK

{Peace}

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