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personally i don't take on this topic cuz drugs and thugs only wreck lives... but i will prop the flow, i don't think it was bad at all... i think you need to take more time to structure a verse, BUT if this WAS a free then i say mad skillz, boy, mad skillz
hey don't rhyme x and sex twice and oh yea...
Is this said in 2, 3 or 4 lines? cause it read really badly...
"i love the euphoria when im rollin on X
wehn i sip on some becks
suddenly i want sex"
{Peace}
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Originally Posted by The End
Carson, you aren't shit, so don't even post to me again. You suck at audio, you suck at text,and you suck at life. You and I both know that you would have lost 99% of your battles if you didn't have a voting ring and pick on the 9 year olds who join the site.
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