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Old 10-04-03, 12:04 AM   #4
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lemme revise this verse..and keep repeatin how Im gonna eat you/
some say fuck alcohol...cuz all I needed was a round to beat you/

^^pretty creative opener....decent

this kid wanted to test, claimin he's rugged, flow leather/
now he represents Plastic Surgery... he Nose Better/

^^lol, funny, but not hard-hitting

With this battle, mos def your sure to struggle/
cause I don't gotta cut your dick off to prove Urine Trouble/

Urine trouble, urine deep shit, these lines are played as hell....have no more effectivness anymore

I'll replace those pimples on your face with hot shell casings/
then stomp your face till it looks like a Picaso Painting!/

^^um.....no man......bad bar..very bad....

i Knock u out come face me n ill portrait ur ass, get Framed/
shove an Empty Cash Register up your Ass" cause ain't SHIT CHANGED!/

^^decent closer

Overall-6/10

Artiq-
Time to beat this Kid, and so this will be More-Of-A-Winnin'-Streak
I've heard ya Timid-Speech, ya just not touchin' much Sorta-Like-A-Midget's-Reach

^^good use of multis...kinda played though

This Kid actin' like he Birthed-The-Site, I'll "cut ya wrong" like a Clumsy Surgeon-Might
Always clamin' ya Verse-Is-Tight - Ya like an over confident Zebra, Still Thinkin' Ya Earned-Ya-Stripes

^^lol...this was nice...

when u read what i verbalize itll burn-ur-eyes
u couldnt bust any knowledge if ur sperm-was-wise

^^lmao...simple but funny as hell

The hall of fame's Strippin'-Ya-License cuz“ ya not Spittin'-The-Nicest, and I'm Beginnin'-To-Like-It
Better get Equipped-With-A-Sidekick - Think ya winning? Better change ya thoughts Like Manipulative-Psychics

^^damn.......hell of a finisher

Overall-8.5/10

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good battle...