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Old 10-04-03, 01:27 AM   #5
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Unfortunately i have to say the hate part had way more flow...

i like this approach of yours...but could you make it more clear where the rhyming structure is... it's difficult to read the way you're typin it out... but that's just me...

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Carson, you aren't shit, so don't even post to me again. You suck at audio, you suck at text,and you suck at life. You and I both know that you would have lost 99% of your battles if you didn't have a voting ring and pick on the 9 year olds who join the site.
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