I'm pretty sure this is the first peice of yours of anything I've ever read. Anyway, I'm only replying because I know you'll reply to others here. Or if not, then I could always use the +1 to my post count.

First off, excellent unobstructed flow. It would go great with a beat at nearly any tempo. Even with the lines broken in the middle, everything managed to go consistentfully smooth. The metaphor of the truth being blind light kind of went over my head. But a lot of what you said did ring true about stereotypes, being held back, fear of evolving and narrow mindfullness.

Personally I wouldn't mind seeing more of your work in here.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.