ok in my eyes Whitelightning won this topic match

His Wife and Kids Were His Everything
To See Them Fight Was a Painful Sting
It Was Being Torn Apart Right From the Start
Deep Depression Was Motive For His Agression
^^^best part of your verse son...

now i didnt really think either of you had GREAT topicals...
but they were ok... it seems like you both rushed them to get them in on time... or maybe you dont have much topical experience... but thie WAS a good topic...

2hot: your verse was very simplistic... i could guess what the next line was gonna say... try to use better vocab and more multis... maybe a few metas... keep workin tho... good try

vote = WhiteLightning