^^^pretty good... salute brings alot of ideas to mind... i think i could have worked with it...

once again for the men whose standing in prison...
as he passez out cigarettes he is handing addiction...
^^^dopest lines...

i know this aint you comin hard on a topical... but i dont understand why you wouldnt try unles you knew you were gonna be no-showed... oh well its a good read and the last line cracked me up!

peep my ss verse... its in open mic... slight of hand... i need some feedback,