werdness^
whitlightnings was better...just dealt with the topical alot better but both seemed like they lacked topical experience
WL's verse had more feel to it and was a decent atempt at the topic
2hot really seemed to be lost no offence kid.,.just need to write more pieces to get it under your belt..didnt grab me at all
both need to elevate some...but both have potential..
peace