"Look through the eyes of a bullet
Before you put your finger on the trigger and pull it"
^loved that line man... oh shit... good ending....
shit was cool, need more work on the flow, and maybe adding stronger vocab, but whatever.... I ain't too big on vocab... lol....
I liked the concept man... how certein actions lead to others and shit... cool....
I liked the length too... lol... not too long, not too short..
yo, keep dropping dawg

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