ight breakdown...

About 15 lines and I'm rusty...like ya verbal hinge
I can tell your spittin fire cause...ya rhymes are singed

Not even a punch more of a comliment if u ask me


Ya chance of livin is none... just like a fish outa water
And ya punches are old...like the population of Florida

No flow... since when does water and Florida rhyme? lol but not a bad meta

Been here for 12 days and as far as rap...he hasn't learned
Even if he was a waiter...I wouldn't be gettin served

First line is a filler second is played

Royal...

Stop usin these thing...... "s... //... and - and bold letters...... it's herbish and newbish.... and don't stretch ya lines...... keep em short and sweet...... but props cuz ur verse was sick

Vote: Royal

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