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Old 10-04-03, 05:00 PM   #6
-Magnitude
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Wow, nice battle from both of you, Cam you really got into this & Bribe u definitly have improved alot since your last topical..
Camarac - you came hard, & I know you really felt this topic, the imagery, internals and flow was all there, and well writen..
Bribe - your improving so much everytime you battle heads like Cam, & I see good things coming out of you, just not a win yet..

Cam took this in my opinion because he just took the topic to higher level then Bribe, I mean dont get me wrong, Bribe u came strong, but Cam just had some lines that made me go cross eyed..

Lines that stuck out:

[ Camarac ]

the Letters fade as i Question Fate w/ these Hands of nothing
Because you'll Fall for anything unless you Stand for something. .


[ Bribeone1 ]

the fact is,.. she sits for hours for a great conversation she devours.
Towers of flowers washed ashore as this beautiful rose showers.

Vote - Cam

Great battle to both of you though..