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IP:
It seems to me that you are getting better at this ....
your rhymes are gettin tighter, and i see more flow than before....
BUT, it also seems as if you didn't take to heart my feed on lost love... or anything anybody has said about the poor structure...
please make this more readable and develop a rhyming scheme...
{Peace}
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Originally Posted by The End
Carson, you aren't shit, so don't even post to me again. You suck at audio, you suck at text,and you suck at life. You and I both know that you would have lost 99% of your battles if you didn't have a voting ring and pick on the 9 year olds who join the site.
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