freestyle that was pretty basic man you got to get more creative and work on ya multi's and wordplay and vocab I cant really say much cause I am still trying to work on the same things but I figured you might want some pointers if you want another battle hit me up though and I'll battle ya

and whoever gets a chance peep this and lets please get some honest votes cause if you read through all the posts youll we been haven probs with peops talkin shit about legit votes

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