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Old 10-04-03, 07:33 PM   #2
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Lady Wun..thank you for being one of the few
that followed the rules and replies to others in
this forum befor posting your own...thats
appreciated by the mods and the people
who post in here..now for your poem here....

I got many different vibes from reading this and
if im right and if this was purposely done it was
done well Lady Wun

crossing paths with someone that you really connect with*
rambling about your motivation or reason that your here*
and then somewhat..paying respects to those there for you*

I think thats what you were writing/mixing together...
if im wrong I appologize...poetry gives many different
meanings which is the wonderful thing about it
and I thougt this was a short decent first piece...

la paz
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