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Old 10-04-03, 09:50 PM   #6
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ok breakdown

MOB-

Every1 luvs MOBS 'Style', im like 1 big popular 'Fasion Trend'
Hyps 'Too Slow' for this, 'A.D.D Kids Tryin to Comprehend'

^^weak opener..like add kids trying to comprehend I think you meant...which makes it more clear/better, but still kinda weak

My spits are always 'Fresh and Colorful', u can call me 'TIDE'
This battles like 'Grilled steak' Tacos, it'll 'Lean to one side' (MINE)

^^lol...funny

Ur Incapabal 2 Entertain, puttin ppl asleep like the Man wit Sand
Battlin me is 'Suicide', your a Soilder Runnin Threw 'No mans Land'

^^ok....didn't like it too much though

When I called U out ya shoulda pretented it was sumtin u didnt C
Like 'Blinds on the Street' Ur dumb for trying 2 'Come across Me'

^^first line wack...second ok


Ill leave u speechless unable to spit shit like Tongues to a Winter Rod
Hyps Records more "Overated than Brooklyn", and he wants to be a Mod

^^lol...very nice finisher....best bar of your verse by far...nice personal

Hypnotic

I spit betta 'shit' than u, ill make ur 'feces' envy me//
Like 'zap', ur 4 'computer love', this fag make love to his 'pc screen'//

^^eh...decent opener..kinda weak

I'll kill a MOB like 'Johnny cage' rip ur 'torso' from ur 'waist'//
Misplace ur 'pupils out ur eyes' so u can say ur 'seein' my flowz 'straight'//

^^first line was nice...second played

This cat dont 'want it', like' refusing' himself to b messed wit
Pop 'sleepin pills' in my drink and im still gonna be 'restless'//

^^ouch...nice punch

'Test this' like success to 'algebraic expressions'//
Raise ur hand' was a mistake to this battle 'merkin u was my lesson'//

^^wow...very nice

Im 'alterin ur agenda' so u can have a 'change of plans'//
'bite' flowz from my hands, I'll 'banish' tha w from u in this battle,put it at the t'op of ur avatar:BANNED'//

^^this was ok...kinda weak finisher

Overall
I rate this bout 7.5-6.5 in favor of hypnotic....

Even though MOB had a very nice finisher...I just didn't think he had anything else really hard-hitting, whereas hyp displayed consistency throughout his verse and has 2 very solid, hard-hitting bars/punches

Vote=hyp

major props to both though