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My agreeances to Co yet again...
eatawhateva... hear this... try breaking your rhyme structure into a pattern... don't mean to say that you should stick to that pattern... naw jus rock between one flow scheme to the next...
Ex.
"I kick* beats(A), like I kick* nethers(B),
I lick* teats(A), like I sport leathers(B)"
do you see? ifin ya keep workin it...it would only get better...
{Peace}
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Originally Posted by The End
Carson, you aren't shit, so don't even post to me again. You suck at audio, you suck at text,and you suck at life. You and I both know that you would have lost 99% of your battles if you didn't have a voting ring and pick on the 9 year olds who join the site.
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