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Whoooah! dud this seems to be not well thought through...
some of the lines don't even rhyme properly... k?
ex.
My lose screws seem to all have dissapear/
Seeing demons in my dreams yeah i know it's not real/
and steer clear of words you've already used in the same line... it sounds put on.....unless... it has some meaning...
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Sitting in the bar, pass the hennesy at the far, smoking weed in the bar, police bugs on my car/
keep workin on it
{Peace}
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Originally Posted by The End
Carson, you aren't shit, so don't even post to me again. You suck at audio, you suck at text,and you suck at life. You and I both know that you would have lost 99% of your battles if you didn't have a voting ring and pick on the 9 year olds who join the site.
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