I dont agree that emotions should stay the same throughout a piece. At times, the very poem is about changing and growing, facing what it is you are writing about, and finding the strength to stand tall against it.

I felt this piece was a journey, yes, it started out defeated, because you were.. then you almost convinced yourself that you had the will power to over come that defeat, by 'putting up with it no more' ... but in the end, your love won you over again, and I have to tell you, that ending...

im callin u again

said so much about how you feel.
I dont usually warm to this type of grammatical use, as an english major... it tends to wane my interest rather fast in most cases, but in this piece you kept the flow up, and you remained on the same theme grammatically speaking, that- combined with the content, I was unable to stop reading.

Lots of emotion.. Nice piece, and be strong.. dont run up that phone bill if shes just messing with ya

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