But joy shone through my dark broken heart/
And stiche4d 2gether a heart that was once apart/
And so I can truthfully say I love the world/

These lines are beautiful. Could be cleaned up a little, but the message is beautfiul. For someone who doesnt actually feel this way, you've done a good job of portraying the emotion.

It tells me that at least you want to love. You have the desire to love. Alot of people are bereft of even that. So, there is hope yet

Nice piece Malb.

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