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Old 10-05-03, 12:54 AM   #6
Tourniquet
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Re: just being helpful

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Originally posted by LadyWun


also try to use spellcheck because its hard to decypher
it when we cant really tell what word you want to use...


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I agree, and not just directed at you

Spellcheck, Spellcheck, Spellcheck.

Too many poems here lose impact because of simple little things. Its amazing the difference it can make, its a great tool.. use it!

The concept here is really good, and your layout, but I did feel it a little disjointed having to 'figure out' what some of the lines were saying to me.

Peace.
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