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Old 10-05-03, 12:59 AM   #5
Dirty Sally
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ewww look at your siggy, lmao...

neways back to the piece. I wasn't feeling that one. There is one good line -banks shanks his cock into 50's mouth that's the real reason he got a new dimple. Otherwise it was weak. Next time throw in some punches, metas. multies and better wordplay and you'd have a nice drop with a flow to it.
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