lol..........im guessin yall got the wrong idea about my poem......"he" isnt messin wit me cus im a "he"....its more of a she thas gasin me up..........but i have gotten a few comments on the lines: i got my own words ta make u feel like i did,
cheese fa a rat, an candy for a kid,
poetry for a sap with emotions easily tamed
but revenge is the only joy for a heart already slain
....but to tell the truth its juss a few examples of bait.....my words fa her, cheese fa the rat, candy fa a kid......it made sence to me....but i prolly should have worded it better......an mad thanx to the english major puttin up with my horrible misuse of words an improper grammer........thanx keep tellin me my flaws.....