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wow this was strong! and yeah kinda scary, but it seems like the person in this turns to beating and killing other ppl because they feel lost or left out, and they might not know how to talk to other ppl. thats what i got from it and it was a good message.

it was short and kept to a simple rhyme scheme, but it worked for it, u were able to get across strong emotions and keep it simple it was nice.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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