damn dude that was some deep shit, u could tell u put alot of emotion and time into makin that, the vocab and wordplay were good, the content and topic were definietly original, the only critiscism ima give is try and make the hook a little more complex, i dunno, i might just depend on the reader, but i thought that could be elevated a little more, its a shame this is gettin slept on cause that was an excellent post.

peace.....