and it hurt like hell dog you gon' think you at the beach/
cuz its so many shells wit all that mothafuckin heat/
not many otha brothas really wanna fuck wit me/
cuz i'll flip a clip so quick wit buck you end up stuck wit me/


^^watch ya rhymin words, try not to use same ending twice in a row unless you makin some kind of song shit or w/e.

some other places you need to work on too, just dont get in too much of a hurry when u tryin to ryhme cause you might figure out it dont rhyme at all.

If this wuz ur first one, its alright.
Keep writin'

{Love}