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Im gonna have to go with Youngwhite on this one but let me break this shit down for you
I'ma do ya like Toni Braxton...make sure ya never "Breathe Again"
too late to reverse ya fate...a hearse is what ya leavin in
nice opener thugd, and like the rest of your verse, ill wordplay, you definitely excelled in that category over young.
I returned to bring the “Ache-man” like Dallas bringing Troy back//
this line is another example of your ill wordplay, a few things you lack in were really focused punches and personals and vocab.. you need to improve in those categories
young was a lot more elevated in this, he showed it through his nice vocab usage, and the complex punches he had at the end like
15-25 don't matter to me, you aint no 'Emcee' - I think we'd all agree that I will "Cradle you 2 Ya Grave" like I was 'Jet Li'.
although movie punches are played, this one was nice cuz he incorporated the title as part of the punch line.. nice wordplay too
all in all i have to give this to youngwhitethug
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