breakdown
Thugd
I'ma do ya like Toni Braxton...make sure ya never "Breathe Again"
too late to reverse ya fate...a hearse is what ya leavin in

^^played as hell

White-PAc receive a win...Do or Die couldn't "Picture This"
ya typed a 50 bar novel thug.. my 20'll leave ya scriptures ripped

^^wack.....

this quick verse is sicc..enough to leave ya bed ridden
some Exorcist shit,projectile pukin w/ ya head spinnin

^^ok you seem to be picking it up...this was decent

Da Mics left grinnin laughin at this lonely punk
ya bitch is "Changin Faces"..do ya mind if she strokes me up

^^ok...kinda weak

ya never been known to bust..with nutz or with ya wordplay
YOUng couldn't spit shit...he's shootin blanks I heard ya girl say

^^this was ok,I guess...but played

Switch it UP..

fuck that…this is the meaning of winner take all//
cause in this case, the harder I am- the bigger they fall//

^^you tried putting a nice spin on this...but you tried to be too creative and in the end it doesnt make much sense loll...but decent

triggerin brawls- I constantly destroy cat’s deploy they wak raps//
I returned to bring the “Ache-man” like Dallas bringing Troy back//

^^this was pretty good....nice punch

damn tho- you picked the wrong time to enter this battlem wit-me//
facing a vandal that’s got a handle on banter generously//

^^wtf??????this was wack

venomously- quite frightening with my writing//
Younb White pac- don’t excite me, you couldn’t “thrill da mic” sky diving//

^um...riiiighhht.....

no shock to heads, I rock threads- you’ll end up with ya ask kicked//
not to brag kid, but this is the reason THugd-out was a number 1 draft pick//

^^ok....still very weak

his only option evasion- persuade em- so this whore knows//
TOO LATE- “Signs” of my invasion left with a gauge imprint in ya “corn rows”//

^^this was a decent finisher

Overall-Very weak verse...you seriously gotta work on ya punches...3/10

Youngwhitethug
Fufilling" a verse wit rap type -electronics-, neva seen an
*18 Year* old staying "Hooked On Phonics".

^^nice flow...but very played

I don't create problems, I only squash 'beef.' I know thats a 'relief' to your 'psychotic belief'.

^^this was pretty nice...good use of multis

Im the commander in 'lead', wordplay so hard makeing you 'proceed' to 'plead'.

^^flow was horrible here, as was the punch

When Im on 'top' I can't lose my 'spot', aint battled in three months and my led pencil tip still stays 'hot'.

^^weak punch....multis seemed forced

I know why "Cumd-Mouth-Dyke" dosent wanna spit -first- because he dosen't want his shit -reversed-, because his shit's 'rehearsed'.

^^If you hadn't repeated shit this would be a great punch, but it was still pretty good...nice

This is aint my real verse, it's just a 'rough sketch', I'm still suprised that this bitch aint 'bluffed yet'.

^^wack...

15-25 don't matter to me, you aint no 'Emcee' - I think we'd all agree that I will "Cradle you 2 Ya Grave" like I was 'Jet Li'.

^^a bit played...but ok multis again

This nigga keep's (IM'in) me on A.I.M. - asking me questions like how *Gay.I.Am.

^^um...wtf was this?????A punch???

Hell yea you crazy, get you a "life". All up on my dick like you was my "wife".

^^wow...how played could ya get

It's a 'drastic measure', and my 'pleasure' to rip you - this is yo 'debut' fo me to 'consume' you.

^^flow was messed up here, the first part was nice though

Everytime I step to the Mic - Emcees step back. I slang cocaine, because Im addicted to crack.

^^Ok...diss him, don't compliment yourself

Shit I aint 'ashamed', (TUPAC) in yo avitar - you puttin 'shame' to his 'name', he didn't come back this year because you 'da blame'.

^^wack as hell

I know you still searchin fo that 'fortune', yo 'miss-fortune' was battleing me because I left yo -illterate- brain full of 'distortion'.

^^this was decent

Useing Lotion, thats 'sexual assault' - 1st loss on your record and proud to say it's my 'fault'.

^^lol...pretty good, looks like you're finally picking it up

I lost to Mary~Jane but ya know thats a 'practice', this is the real shit - a "RAP BATTLE" 'mal-practice.'

^^this was pretty good...nice punch

This is more of a diss off of my "MixTape", this knife is bloody, yo lemme 'switch blades'.

^^I liked this.......even though its a bit played...you put a creative spin on this
FINISHER

"Cash Money Wigga" cuz I get paied all the 'loot', even Mary~Jane is thankin me fo fuckin up this 'fruit'.

^^ok...kinda weak finisher


Overall-weak verse...but you picked it up a bit at the end..5/10

Honestly, for someone who is 6-0 v.s. someone who is 37-5, this was weak as hell. I give my vote to young cuz at the end of his verse he started picking it up........but this was a weak ass battle...just weak

Vote=young