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Old 10-05-03, 09:49 PM   #7
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From: BELLSIDE...THATS ALL YOU NEED TO KNOW MOTHER FUCKER!!...~OrIgInAl~RaPbAtTlE~
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well...ya chorus seemed that repetitive to somma ya verses....both of you need to fix ya structure and ya need to be more complex....

overall this waddnt that good...all i saw was use and repeat lyrics in this...come on dukes....ya gotta get it together


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