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well...ya chorus seemed that repetitive to somma ya verses....both of you need to fix ya structure and ya need to be more complex....
overall this waddnt that good...all i saw was use and repeat lyrics in this...come on dukes....ya gotta get it together
igido
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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S
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