aight...
your flow was good, it stayed at a good pace and it was easily read.
your vocab was perhaps the best I've seen on this site... damn good kid,
wordplay- your wordplay wasnt in this one, but like others before me said, its not needed in a peice like this...
and your topic, I like this topic, its deep and it lets out emotion...
I kinda like it when people drop something with a hidden meaning, I'm into poetry and stuff like that...
overall this was a very nice drop... I like your style.
thanks for the feed on my drop,
A.T.