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Old 10-06-03, 05:31 AM   #3
Johnny 6-feet
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really nice beat. kind of a battle feel to it. Mv's verse was very narrative and sounded like a hungry young rapper, some great one-liners "tounge kissing a glock" a standout.

verbal was better, more emotion, multis, etc.

skripts flow was mental, "president in air force ones" loved that line. how much of this was ACTUALLY freestyled? good imagery

snipe was kind of weak, the start was shaky, he sounded like he was making a news report, kind of quietly angry.

S.K.O.E. load of multis, "body rot" line was great, proper battle verse, very tight punches in places. the breaking sweat line was kind of weak.

Kieth Johnson again, kind of weak, a few multis, some lines dint rhyme, his delivery needs a little work. definite potential though.

Cautious flow was immaculate, a lot of "like" lines, strong multis and imagery. good verse.

great piece overall. good work guys.
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