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Old 10-06-03, 06:41 AM   #6
tRiPliCiTy
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fuck seriously like 2 hrs ago, i was dropping a really really long reply to ur shit, then my fuckin computer restarted for no reason, so bear with me and my slack reply

Description is my reflection, the image, implicit repellant
to make decisions that were intelligent, unjust incessant
read this and i was like boom this is the bomb, niceness
strong opener had me curious for the rest

Upon her torrent face, was my figure occupying a foreign space
Law and taste's intergrate in my eyes, then exit and break
liked it how every so lines u broke into wordplay,
orginal flow....and rhyme scheme

Expending on shape, their way of life, are they willing to fight?
against this villain of strife, will you be here, yonder the night?
no & no^^, liked your questions

The ending seemed a lil ruhsed, well maybe cause u intended
this to be only a text piece, cause of that one big verse...

very orignal style, like how u didnt do for that same old
line for line approach 90% of text ppl go for, and ur
steezle was quite the good and orignal, and umm haha
i tried to tell u think on aim like a million times, my rap
voice is similar to urs [well not anymore] so i can muhahahahaahahahaahahahaah manipulate minds by making em think u collabed with me lol j/k............................
your were quite imaginative, and creative,
thank god your shit didnt get repetative,
havent read ur OM shit for like months,
i think the last time was in march when i was mod of this place,
well good luck with what ever goals u got set,
this was like dopernecessity well not to sound like i'm just givin u props for being a mod [u dont do jack crap OM mod work]
well keep dropping more om's cause i really get bored of reading ppl who lack skill............................................. ....

like blaow what up homie, return the favor pl
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83778
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