Liba....

thought there was some alright word play and personals, though i didn't think the opening bar was very good, i think it is better to start with something strong, i liked the structure it was easy to read

NeCrId....

thought this had the stronger punch lines, again thought there was some not bad word play, but the structure was poor and some of the lines were stretched

overall i thought they were quite close, but based on the way it flowed im votin Liba

VOTE=Liba Dee