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i found tha rhyme scheme,well expressed emotions here,vocab was good in some places,descent in ohers,wordplay wasn't there in abundance but was present and was descent,if it's suppose to be a song do a hook,if it was jus a spit it was good as it had me feelin what u were talkin bout and wondering,so good work,did what was desired.
Peice
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