Thread: Da Renegade
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Old 10-06-03, 12:01 PM   #14
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this was a good consistent drop....wordplay and content wise...

i think the structure needs to be a lil tighter...and that will help the flow get much more consistent...but it was a nice drop....

i liked:

...Artillery shells - rip em to shreds - strippin they heads|
Exposin their thoughts when they're brains be hanging from threads|
Of what remains of their vertebrae column|
Let the weapon spray stall em, if they not awake~rob em|

keep em comin....
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