Thread: Complexity
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Old 10-06-03, 01:14 PM   #9
pot1ent
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I should really give you the same length you did to me..But I ain't about that...

Your flow was hyped up alot up there...I felt it was good but wasn't quite perfect...It fell of a bit...Due to not keeping a scheme...I thought your content fell off compared to your hook...If you had made your content of the piece the same as your hook it woulda been really good...It was a good read though
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