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iight heres the break down
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Lethargic Is A Wannabe Textcee? I Laugh Then I Smack Him Wit Tha Mic
Please Kid Your Not On My Level In Text, So Drop The Mic Let's Fight
------played line didnt hit to hard
Murder Ya Wack Ass! Now Feel My Imbitions To Put Leth In Painfull Positions
Fuck Writtens! Now Whats It Feel Like To Barely Beat Newbies With Bittens
-------this didnt hit to ard but i was feelin it
I'm Way Above This Kid, I Told Him He Was A Wack Emcee, He Didn't Attempt To Rebel
Stop Ya Thug Act, The Only Way You 'Die By The Gun' Is If You 'Kill Yourself'
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Vets Frown Upon Ya Text, This Kids Thoughts May Be Hatching, So I Shoot-Down-His-Nest Wit Tecks
This Kid's Possessed, So I Send A 'White Flag' Through His Chest So He Can Die A 'Peaceful-Death'
-------GOOD SHYT...but streched
I'll Hit U Up Wit Some Flows, You Battle Newbs So It's Like You Battle 'Amungst Ya Own'
Ya Fagness Is Showin, The Only Way Ya Punches Connect Is If Ya Rap Over A 'Mobile Phone'
---------no...1st line was ok..the second ..no
overall i give this bout a 6.8/10
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Poppin off from the Qwerty and use a keystyle to beat you/
Clear cut I'ma treat you, fuckin Diamond Mindz are see through/
-----amazing punch rite here...greatness
5-0, I'ma streak through, like police coming after YOUR shit/
Put this bitch on Locke and knock ILLunatic into -=[oRbiiT]=-/
-----this was pretty goood, nice wordplay
Poor bitch, wonder what scripts this whore bit, fuckin nuisance/
Call it Tha Remix when he's Coin*'n a phrase from Tu Cents/
-----no..didnt like this...some peopel wont b able to get it
Translucent and terrified, seein thoughts your mind'z makin/
Notice the sig and avy, that's twice that your ass was shakin/
----LOL....nice..wordplay was key here n the whole shake thing was good.
45's leavin you mistaken, your chest is holey, but you ain't blessed/
I must confess, I cut him off at the waist to get a leg ahead of the rest/..........played closer....just worded differntly
ill give this a 8.4/10
vote- lethargic
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