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Old 10-06-03, 05:02 PM   #2
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From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin
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wow powerful story!!! and if only all guys did relise some time that they too had to grow up and be an adult because its both their faults, even if it is too late, he can still help in some form or another. this was so powerful that i was almost crying but some personal experinces that came to mind helped that some too, for you see Nyla is my child and her father i havent talked to in the past 3/4 years because he didnt know how to grow up either.

anywho while reading this poem since it had such power in it you didnt notice any flaws, it was all covered up, you become sucked in to this piece and forget everything else nice

~Tera~
DONT HATE
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~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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