FLOW: it was ok liked it for the peice but the peice its self lacked complexity, not much more to say

Wordplay: its was good, wasnt the best wasnt the worst... overall it was ok. it got the reader and kept them in it till the end. vocab was ok too...

Topic: latly Poetics scriptures is owned on this kinda drop... sad realy, need ta bring back bounce n decit n da joka...


overall: 8/10