one filed, your a fucking herb (yes im hating) other wise ok drop for a newb... not gonna break it down, but if you gonna dedicate it to someone ADD RAW EMOTION not what you feel on the outside, but what you feel deep down inside, the deeper you are with your words, the better it will flow and gel together forming a great peice. the more emotion you poor into a drop, the better it sounds and expreses itself. to me looks like you ran threw it, it takes awhile, id second this drop take it back re do it with all the emotion you can sum up into it, then re post it...