Banned for being stupid
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that was actually an ok peice for a newb. ur flow fell off a little, but like masta c said if u include some internals the flow should get better. the emotion was there, but ima say try to expand ur vocab and wordplay next time, and i would also choose a different topic cause drops about girls are pretty damn played, but other than that it wasnt bad, keep at it, u got talent man.
peace.....
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